Mine was called Going to school it went like this.
Huh,huh,huh
ten minutes to get to school Clank , Clonk ,Clink ,Clank the sound of shoes on the bitumen
squirt ,splash ,splish the squirting of the bubblers rattle ,buzz ,clank a baby drops its rattle
bonk I bump my head on the bag racks buzz ,buzz ,buzz my watch alarm goes off its only 8 o'clock. I think its a good poem but I'd improve it by adding more describing words.
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